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Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« on: January 11, 2016, 03:02:59 am »

Hi guys, here is a track I been working on, any feedback would be great.
Thanks! :)



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Re: Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2016, 03:12:05 am »
Hey Pato, my only comment is that it's about 6-8 minutes too short. : )

Sounds fucking great. Really. I love this kind of stuff. Has a very fun, playful, and romantic feel to it.

If I was streaming di.fm or something in the Chillout station, and this came on, I'd notice it and look to see info on the artist and song.

Consider me a fan.
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Re: Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2016, 03:22:09 am »
Agree with Dot on the fun feel.

It's got a nice smooth vibe to it, taking a page out of the Kaskade/Deadmau5 I remember playbook.

You do a really nice job with the white noise FX transitions.  Also I like your percussive elements, they sit well together. Are those loops or hand made?

I think to get it longer like Dot mentions, add a new element at the end of your track and ride with that for a while.
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Re: Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« Reply #3 on: January 11, 2016, 04:02:55 am »
I really like this idea.

I believe your fx and high hats/shakers are a little to loud, and kind of take away from the main plucks and lead. And also since plucks tend to share the same frequency range i would recommend you make some eq cuts to free up space for each element to come through clearly.

definitely overall would just turn down the percussion by a few dbs and fx and bring up the plucks.

good luck  ;D

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Re: Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2016, 04:11:03 am »
Hey Pato, my only comment is that it's about 6-8 minutes too short. : )

Sounds fucking great. Really. I love this kind of stuff. Has a very fun, playful, and romantic feel to it.

If I was streaming di.fm or something in the Chillout station, and this came on, I'd notice it and look to see info on the artist and song.

Consider me a fan.
glad you like it Dot and actually the original it's like 8 minutes  :)

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Re: Pato - New Day (Progressive)
« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2016, 04:14:13 am »
Agree with Dot on the fun feel.

It's got a nice smooth vibe to it, taking a page out of the Kaskade/Deadmau5 I remember playbook.

You do a really nice job with the white noise FX transitions.  Also I like your percussive elements, they sit well together. Are those loops or hand made?

I think to get it longer like Dot mentions, add a new element at the end of your track and ride with that for a while.
Thanks so much for the comments wildcat!!
yes I made that percussive vibe  :)