The themes are cool. I'd say you have to decide if the drums are going to take a back seat or a front seat. Either make them smaller and glitchy, and bring them up front and make them punch.

My preference for this track would be to keep it laid back and ambient. My 2¢.

I would recommend adding more build up, dynamic, and rhythmic movement to keep the tune moving. 
Try more filters crescendos or just crescendos for nearing the break and drop.  Also the READY SET GO part seems to drag out quite long which might just be a simple stylistic choice which is fine but I would personally either shorten it or add some more elements that keep it moving.  There also isnt a whole lot of frequency variation on what is playing for the majority of the track and it feels fairly empty.  The mix isnt bad but agree with what was said about deciding on a style to make it electrifying or ambient.

Keep it up!