From the 0:11 - the synth goes out of key, and the same thing in 0:55 (at this point it kills the break). Maybe try another note, when it comes higher ? Because the beginning is interesting. You have an originality in this track, you experimented on the drop, but when the sound from 1:17-18 goes with one note hm.. just try to add some reverb in this little time section, it will sound bigger (now it feels very concentrated in the center). Remember, it's other person opinion, you can agree or disagree, it's your track and your music
Good luck in work !
