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Spin - Epicycle
« on: January 10, 2016, 07:11:10 pm »

This is the last track that I've totally finished.. let me know what you think, criticism is pretty valuable.

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Re: Spin - Epicycle
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2016, 07:58:45 pm »
My thoughts:

Intro is cool, has a nice building feel to it
First half of the first drop started off pretty cool, got a little boring after a while. Try using some more fills or different sounds to mix it up a bit
Vocal-y thing in the second half of the drop is pretty cool
The part at 3:01 is pretty fricken' dope, gotta give you props on that
I think the kick could be a little heavier, but that may just be my personal taste when it comes to mixing.

Overall, solid track. Just feels a little too repetitive to me.

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Re: Spin - Epicycle
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2016, 09:33:42 pm »
Awesome overall track. I agree with everything Jordan said but could also use a bit more side chain especially during the second drop. It will allow the kick to hit a bit harder.

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Re: Spin - Epicycle
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2016, 11:08:27 pm »
The complextro glitchy part a 1:47 is dope. You should try making it even glitchier with more sounds :) more complex i guess. throw in some reverse snares some white noise a bunch of different samples

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Re: Spin - Epicycle
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2016, 06:13:59 am »
Thanks for the feedback! This will help me with my next releases  8)