1st Listen:
So crisp! Neat remix. The kick feels mono and dry.
2nd Listen (after reviewing the original):
Some of the super-wide high-frequency elements are not mono-compatible. I had to EQ the highs (I run audio through a Xone:92) to get through the track. While some of the intensity of the lead is emulated from the original, other inflections are completely left out. It makes this feel like a re-production, rather than a re-mix (I see you called it a remake on TPF). Still, it's a stellar recreation of the timbre of the original synth!
1:47, the low-passed bass starts a decrescendo into the the 2nd measure of the phrase... it doesn't sound as deliberate as the rest of the track. Maybe start at the low point (1:52) and go from there? The reduction to a mono sine wave is kinda cool.
There's a point 2:30 reveals how compressed the track is in a way that feels accidental... the snare build slips out from under the compressor release awkwardly.
3rd & 4th Listen:
I really like how the track builds anticipation... and then delivers (at 1:31) where the original transitions into its other theme. The build & grandstanding at 2:16 is fairly well done. I like how that same idea is quickly dismissed at 3:04... feels progressive and mature.
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