https://soundcloud.com/brxtnm/love-is-crime/s-Bi5XG

so basically i made this track a couple months back as a remix to Adrian Lux's "Teenage Crime" and I came back to it the other day because i thought it might fit well in the album i'm writing. I removed the acapella so i have room to write an original vocal, but I cant seem to completely tie the beat together, nor can I make a second drop. Anyone have any ideas on how to make this one move a bit? Not open for collaboration at the moment because I have waaay too many going on, but I could really use some feedback. thanks (:

this is actually so dope. Second drop could be similar to the first but maybe with some drum/synth fills to change it up. You can always add more melodic layers to stuff like this too, sort of to fill out the place the vocals used to take up.

this is actually so dope. Second drop could be similar to the first but maybe with some drum/synth fills to change it up. You can always add more melodic layers to stuff like this too, sort of to fill out the place the vocals used to take up.

Thanks! That's definitely true, I might try to add some stuff. Also, the track in your signature is FUCKING FIREEEE. I love that.