So yeah, this is just a small thing I've been working on for a while.. It's really hard to come up with an intro/buildup for it though.. Just let me know what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/mushroomizer/inertia-test-37/s-aQInr

Edit: Updated version here: https://soundcloud.com/mushroomizer/inertia-test-3934-producers-forum-notes/s-3AVDo

- Mush

Might need some more "Air" you know ? Try puting some top reverb on your high end it will sound fuller and richer without affecting the spectrum as a high boost could do !

this is sounding great !
i think if you were to add in some hi-hats, maybe a small plucky / reverb-y arp playing consistently in the background, and possibly a layer on that lead, it could add a little something that's missing.
just some suggestions, keep it up !

right now your mix is really being dominated by those chords and your sub, i personally think itd be beneficial to turn down the sub and focus a little bit more on your 6HZish range. I reccomend reading up on the Fletcher Munson curve, it shows how we perceive volume and its a good place to start learning how to make your mix crisper composition is nice and sound design is cool too!

So, I know it's been ages, but that track I put in this WIP is now done! You can have a listen to it here if you'd like:
But yes, just wanted to say thanks for the advice you all gave me, it really did help out a lot so.. Thanks :)