ready to hear what you think and how I could improve the track, atm the track is missing mastering

https://soundcloud.com/parodyself/captured-remix/s-RPpma

Hey nice song!

I really like the vocal chops.  They sound awesome, and are perfect for this song.  However, I do think that the drums need to stand out a little bit more.  Also the transition at 1:20 seems very random, and almost like a different song.  I would try to put some similar pieces from each part to make these two pieces seem more uniform.  Also the drums in the second drop are different samples all together, and it seems a little bit strange.

That melody jingle at 0:20 is good, and you should expand upon this in your song.  I would consider making this synth stand out a little bit more to give people something to grasp on to.

Also one final thing, I would recommend putting some bass/sub bass in the song somewhere to make it seem more full.  Those vocals are awesome, and I'm excited to see what songs you make in the future

Around 1:50 ish the vocals and the strings are not in key. Love that you also use that song's acapella though, got good taste!

i like it! Cheeky thing you got going on with the vocal chops there, but as someone said earlier, i think you may be overusing them... and that bell slide thingy you got going around .20 is great! maybe building on that to give the song a little more flavour, and maybe stick to the original drumsamples in the second part of the song? got the feeling that it was kinda like a mix...
But overall, i think you have something good to work on here! looking forward to see the end result!