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Please leave your opinions 
I can definitely see where you're going with it. I would try to make the kick a bit more predominant throughout the mix. I assume you were aiming more for a deep house kind of thing so the kick isn't so intense like in trance or electro but I think it could use a bit more mids/highs to stand out. Just my subjective opinion 
Idk man, i think if you made the kick more prominent, it would ruin the sort of indie vibe it's given out.
What i think you could do is maybe layer the kick and snare a little better.
i think that there's maybe to much of a high cut on the kick and to much of a low cut on the snare.
You should blend them together a little bit so you get the sound and feeling of them playing at the same time but still hearing both characteristics when played individually.
that bass line can come up too i think.
little more sub in the bass and less from the kick. (to make it sit with the added sub in the bass line)
