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Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« on: January 09, 2016, 05:11:41 am »
An original track I am in the process of. Didn't really pay too much attention to eqing/mixing down. Would appreciate feeback to help me take this track further! Thank you in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/dansamurai/wip/s-vYm3n

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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2016, 05:27:16 am »
hey sounding pretty good so far! i really like the arrangement of the track, personally I didn't find any parts to be too long. i think the section at 0:56 to 1:23 could be made a little more interesting though, maybe you could include some more percussion or something. that's really all i found with this one, nice work!
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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2016, 05:30:35 am »
Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2016, 05:31:37 am »
no problem  :)
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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2016, 05:38:17 am »
That 808 is absolutely HUGE! Love it.

I would add more percussion here and there to spice it up. Also, I would add an attack to the sound that comes in at 0:21, as it's a bit abrupt at that moment.

Good job man! The track was really cool!

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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #5 on: January 09, 2016, 05:41:11 am »
Thanks for the feedback! :]

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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #6 on: January 09, 2016, 05:59:26 am »
Pretty cool track!!Could use some extra percussion tho :)

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Re: Something I'm working on. would like feeback!
« Reply #7 on: January 09, 2016, 06:14:33 am »
Seems like so far, everyone agrees on more percussion! Thanks guys! :)