Author Topic: Four Leaf Clever - Caress (WIP) (Read 9388 times)

Four Leaf Clever · « **on:** January 09, 2016, 03:24:15 am »

want it to feel like heaven, but not copy and paste shit...

armanip · « **Reply #1 on:** January 09, 2016, 03:27:00 am »

Diggin it. Definetly thinks it's needs some vocals and mess with some hi hat rhythm

UsernamesGiveMeAnxiety · « **Reply #2 on:** January 09, 2016, 03:31:34 am »

Very cool! I think the snare could use a bit more weight though. It has a nice buzz on the high end, but I would try layering it with a snare thats heavy around 200-500hz, see if you like it.

Four Leaf Clever · « **Reply #3 on:** January 09, 2016, 03:37:20 am »

Quote from: armanip on January 09, 2016, 03:27:00 am

Diggin it. Definetly thinks it's needs some vocals and mess with some hi hat rhythm

Working on the hi hat flow right now. hmm yes female vox! genius

Four Leaf Clever · « **Reply #4 on:** January 09, 2016, 03:38:26 am »

Quote from: UsernamesGiveMeAnxiety on January 09, 2016, 03:31:34 am

Very cool! I think the snare could use a bit more weight though. It has a nice buzz on the high end, but I would try layering it with a snare thats heavy around 200-500hz, see if you like it.

shit, I only had one snare, no layers.... thanks for the reply! <3

Mussar · « **Reply #5 on:** January 09, 2016, 04:03:16 am »

Really digging this! To expand on the female vocals idea, you could totally throw a female vocal sample into a sampler with some looping and portamento and play a nice lead melody over this to give it some emotion and something for the listener to sing along to.

mcgold · « **Reply #6 on:** January 09, 2016, 06:40:57 pm »

this is pretty cool. the bass is great and carries good weight but i think the kick sample or processing could be a little thumpier/deeper..it kinda sounds like the kick is a little distorted as is. Hi hats could be a little brighter/sharper as well. the little plucks could be mixed a little bit more to the front, i like them

Four Leaf Clever · « **Reply #7 on:** January 10, 2016, 03:09:21 am »

Quote from: mcgold on January 09, 2016, 06:40:57 pm

this is pretty cool. the bass is great and carries good weight but i think the kick sample or processing could be a little thumpier/deeper..it kinda sounds like the kick is a little distorted as is. Hi hats could be a little brighter/sharper as well. the little plucks could be mixed a little bit more to the front, i like them

sounds like shit compared to this new version. thanks for the heads up!

poisonstings · « **Reply #8 on:** January 10, 2016, 03:51:03 am »

Quote from: Four Leaf Clever on January 09, 2016, 03:37:20 am

Quote from: armanip on January 09, 2016, 03:27:00 am
Diggin it. Definetly thinks it's needs some vocals and mess with some hi hat rhythm

Working on the hi hat flow right now. hmm yes female vox! genius

I think using female vocal chops for a simple melody, and then getting male rap over that as the focal point of the song would be sweet.

visorakmark · « **Reply #9 on:** January 10, 2016, 08:18:12 am »

Chill sounds! Only suggestion is to adjust that kick some. You might have it distorting /poofing on purpose, but I feel it is a bit awkward for the vibe of the track. Def needs a deeper punch regardless. Looking forward to more from you.

darkanddarkmusic · « **Reply #10 on:** January 10, 2016, 03:04:08 pm »

great ambient sound. i agree with the snare needing some work.

Author Topic: Four Leaf Clever - Caress (WIP) (Read 9388 times)

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