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Gearfiend

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Feedback and ideas for these 2 wips?
« on: January 09, 2016, 02:30:02 am »
Hey guys! Have these two tracks but im stuck for ideas, the second one has a possible bassline progression at the end but it obviously isn't part of the actual song arrangement. Let me know what all y'all think!  :)

Away in Dreamland - https://clyp.it/fdlhdwss

Gel Time - https://clyp.it/n5udf4xi

Thanks!
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Re: Feedback and ideas for these 2 wips?
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2016, 03:11:21 am »
gel time seems like it has alot of potential maybe with the a different arrangement you could use what you have as an intro/chorus and then build it up to something else? I felt like it was going to go somewhere but stayed with the progressive vibe. Just my two cents :)

and with a little mixing here and there, that bassline could totally work you should incorporate it.
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Re: Feedback and ideas for these 2 wips?
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2016, 03:13:33 am »
Quote from: deño on January 09, 2016, 03:11:21 am
gel time seems like it has alot of potential maybe with the a different arrangement you could use what you have as an intro/chorus and then build it up to something else? I felt like it was going to go somewhere but stayed with the progressive vibe. Just my two cents :)

and with a little mixing here and there, that bassline could totally work you should incorporate it.

Thanks man, yea it was meant to be an intro, Just not sure where to take it or what kind of synth sounds would fit
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