Heyo, coming back since you've updated everything.
So, Kick is still weak. There's a lack of bass in your experimental drop thingy or it's not low enough. Panning snare could be a good idea if snare are used as percussions not as main snares. Sometimes it's confusing to not hear a heavy snare after the kick.
There is cool ideas, need a bit more work and they could be very cool.