Heyo,
So, Kick is too weak, snare is awfull and not punchy enough. Sound design is nice, and has some good ideas. Melodies/chords are ok.
It's ok, but not mixed, there isn't much to say. If you're sending this to a pro studio for mixing, they'll have a lot of trouble and they will waste their time. Master is different. About the mix, try adding sidechain on every instrument who has low freqs, EQ everything.
It's more efficient if you do the mix, and learn how to do it than sending this to pro studio. It will cost you money, and they probably won't make it awesome because the basics are not that good.
Work on it a bit more and try to at play with the volume of the differents sounds you have, and to EQ a bit, and sidechain.
