Since you'e started out fresh,I can understand the quality of the work won't be as good but you need to work like a lot,like really lot before putting out music! Your track lacks that heavyness,it sounds empty.The basslines are not syncing with each other.There is no sub bass.Riddim basses are usually modulated with little bit of Phasers/Granualizers etc.You need to listen to Krimer/Phiso and see how they have perfected the tracks.Good luck
