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Finished Tracks / [First Beat] "FEMALE FUTURE" via iphone6 garageband
« on: January 24, 2017, 08:57:06 pm »
"FEMALE FUTURE"

My first piece dedicated to the women's movement! I used garageband on my iphone6 and tried my best within the limitations. I had imagined a good rap verse on it, but I didn't know if it needs one (or needs a vocal?). Appreciate your feedback!



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Finished Tracks / Re: Third track!
« on: January 24, 2017, 08:35:42 pm »
I'm immediately attracted to the second song than the first; may be a preference thing. Its captivating trance-like beat--especially how the song starts and builds up--is simple and coherent, generally great choice of chords as well--easy to digest, yet fun and pretty trendy (and I use that as a compliment!). Flows effortlessly, up and down; feels like the flow has a subtle narrative going. The drop/hook is highly finished, well put with all the varying trickling melody sounds, the drums here and there. Dramatic and energetic. However, I wish there was more thought to the actual drumline in general. It's a pretty constant one-two-one-two rhythm (i lack the technical terms for that beat). Also, the song ends the same way it begins--removing (adding) one layer of music at a time. Which isn't a bad thing, it's a bit predictible. Overall, I would listen to this again and again. Well done!

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I'm DoyiFuckingAwesomeLee!!!

Or at least I want to be, and I'm trying to boost my confidence and skills by sharing what I have here, as well as giving feedback to others. :)

I've always been a vocalist, but I felt my creativity and expression expand when composing my own songs.
Current DAW = iphone6 garageband. I'll move on to Logic soon.

Thanks everyone!

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