Dont listen to electronic music. People do drugs when they listen to it.

I got told that from a former best friend of mine. in 2002.

Never let people define who you are. You have the right to pick the direction you go and live.

I say this as a Jehovah's Witness. Not the normal kind that knocks on your door without reason. If this doesnt break down social barriers, nothing does.

For what its worth, you could almost call it Tribal Electro.

Something feels oddly out of sync... maybe the snare and the vocal pattern (could the BPM and the changing speed of the vocals to match your structure that feels odd?)
I try not to point to any specific issue, I just point out oddities, and let you as the artist change it if you agree with the comment.


I like the feel tho. It goes somewhere I would not expect. Im not on board with the Bieber hating. I think some of his productions have potential. But you definitly have something started here.

I saw alot of info on how to learn music theory in another thread. Looks like thats where I will be looking next.

Something tells me that with my borderline obsession with numbers, this should come naturally.

Im a bit of a analytical person, so I tend to seek patterns in music.

Do you think math is a large factor in composition or not?

Just curious what people think, and im leaving the statement vague to invite abstract replies.