wow that's really out of the box !! in a very good way ! nice work !

there are some good ideas, but it also sounds like 5 different songs in one, and although theres no rule in music, no kick in a drop just doesn't feel right. The best tip i can give you is to remix songs, study their structure down to every detail. and once you've remixed atleast 3-4 of them, go back to making originals. if you don't know where to find songs to remix go to wavo.me.
anyways for a first song it shows some promise ! Keep up the good work !

It's pretty cool, the steel drums make me think of beach in the caraibes though not the jungle. Have you considered pitching them down ? I'd also suggest maybe adding a little release on the sine in your second chorus. The silence between some notes doesn't quite make sense to me. That's just my opinion though, its pretty cool as it is. Also I'm listening to this on shitty earplugs in class so I might have missed a few things.

Thanks for the advice guys !

Love it, get an awesome vibe from it. Great job