Thank You Psychosis for listening and for the feedback man!  It was my first attempt with an extended vocal, and I feel it is easy to get carried away with Alan Watts haha.  I am glad that you enjoyed the overall track though.

Hello everyone, I finished this track yesterday and wanted to share it with you all.  I hope you enjoy it!  If you do like it and have a SC account, please drop a like.  Thanks for listening to it.

Thanks for the feedback!  So when you said out of place, do you mean that the drums do not seem to fit with the concept of the overall song?  Or do you mean my drums are out of sync?

Thanks for all of the responses and good information.  Looks like this is something that is achieved through more understanding of how to properly place elements within the full spectrum with minimal clashing, like everyone has mentioned.  One thing I did do however, was purchase Serum to replace Massive.  The sounds that come out of Serum are sooo much higher in quality than massive.  So hopefully that could help me some as well.  Lastly, I feel that having more experience and a better trained ear is ultimately what is going to get me to the next level one day.  I am pretty happy with my current production state only being about 8 months in, I cant expect greatness just yet!

Anyways, thanks again everyone for the advice, and being able to point me in the right direction!

Cheers.

Well, I attempted to try and clean up some of the mud in this however, I wasn't too successful, so I just decided I am completely finished now and I will just close this one out and start working on another project soon.  Just another stepping stone!

Thanks.  Well, here is an update to this song (still not finished).  I tried some new ideas that I haven't experimented with before.  Anyone's opinions are highly encouraged.

done!   nice job on that remix man.

Love the whistle synth

Thank You.