Thanks for the feedback!

I actually started producing not too long ago. So I'm still kinda learning along the way.

Im using Ableton. How about yourself?

Sounds good, but the kick at the drop needs to be a bit more sharper/punchy...

The chords sounds great and it fits into the track seamlessly....

Maybe a bit of sidechaining would help...

Thanks bro....Will take note of that!

if you need some help, we can gets some dm's going on

Hey Peteryunsie, sorry have been caught up this week... Lunar New Year coming soon....was busy with the home cleaning and stuff...
dint get a chance to log back in to the forum to check...But I have already made some changes overall...

But thanks for the offer though.... I'm gonna replace it in soundcloud soon...

it's the low end that's the problem dude. The rest of it sounds alright (critique on consumer speakers)

Do you have a good source of bass replication?

Thanks dude....I've already made some changes to the bass as well as the track....I actually made the track at home with some cheap computer speakers (Which apparently sounded ok to me)...
However, I'm currently going to an edm academy...
So this week when I attended class, I showed my instructor and we both listen to it on the studio monitors...
Boy...I look at him and I knew the bass sounded like ass... Then we both made a few changes...



Since I started getting into edm production a few months ago...I told myself my first 75 - 100 tracks are going to be crap and learn from there....
I was't expecting it to be even "OK" or even alright...hahahaha...didnt expect that you guys thought it was ok.... Thanks!

I'll post up the new one soon!

Hey guys, since the last two tracks I made (Which is shit -... i know)...
I've gotten some critics and still constantly trying to practice and improve....

Here's a new progressive(ish) house track that I did...nothing great though:

https://soundcloud.com/shaun_joseph/shaun-joseph-trial

Yeah , the beggining and the part from 2:04 to 2:33 is completly mistake. This pluck/melody does not fit to this vocal. Also lead in my opinion need's to be changed because it sound's weird (Melody is just too much complicated)

Thanks for the feedback...

I guess I gotta get my ears re-adjust to all the elements....LOL...I dont know why is my brain telling my ears its ok....

But anyway, I'll try to improve in my future productions...

That pluck in the intro (and later on) sounds very under-quantised, almost like it's there by mistake.


Where did you get the vocal from?

I got it from this website called http://www.acapellas4u.co.uk/....

Wow....this is different but awesome...

I would say this is extremely creative, wish I could have more talent to produce something like this....

Very unique...

Thanks guys.... Will take all the feedback into account for future works.

A little of background from me:

No musical background
Never played any musical instrument
Using Ableton for about two months... And made this track...

And of course...listen to shit loads of edm....