You need to get centered! As crazy as it sounds, stop listening to music. Think of it like fasting. Avoid tutorials and message boards. Appreciate sound. Learn to find music in nature.

You'll know when it's time to stop fasting. (´･_･`) You won't just miss music, you'll NEED it! Then you'll hear something more in music. You'll hear struggles, the celebrations of life, and the immense talent of all the artists you love!

Your music won't sound bad anymore, because you'll hear where you were on your own path, and (hopefully) where you intend to go.

Just my thoughts! \(￣< ￣)>

Those vocals are sooo freaky! (⊙＿⊙)
Musically, I think you could use more dynamic contrast... like have some softer sections (intro) to make the loud parts more epic. The whole thing would be even freakier! (∩＿∩)

This is great to have altogether! I'd add: love your art. No matter what anyone says about it, accept everything you do as progress.

Well, it was sooooo short Make more music! (*˘︶˘*)
It was groovy, the intro is real swanky, come back to that for sure! Loose the volume changes in the kick, just slam it!

Amazing! ＠(￣-￣)＠
Kinda busy at some points, but I guess that's your style. Are you signed?... if not, send this everywhere and get on it!