Hello!

This is my new track that I struggled with for quite a long amount of time. It is quite diverse and I hope you have a good journey listening to this! And I also hope you have some critisism aswell c:

Great details, fills. The lead is sometimes a little bit wonky, but the arrangement is very nice, you know how to build tension!!!

The kick at the start is taking way too much space. Good percussion. I'd lower the volume on the finger snap, which is playing alongside the snare in the "drop". Maybe more instrument variation. Good luck!

Very wave-y, I like that! More layering could benefit a lot! And you could try to ditch the last parts' vocal with some melody riff or sth, to make it more interesting to listen to, imo.

The arrangement is too repetetive for my liking. Tip: don't struggle day to day with the same project. It is a common mistake and can leave you with a dead end, where you can't progress on the track and it can start getting frusturating. And, imo, it decreases creativity and that is certainly something you just can NOT afford!! c:

That harmor pluck doe! haha
Anyways, really moist and clean (that is a compliment ))))

Very little movement going on imo, feels like there should be an emotional peak somewhere, but the track just drifts off. Again, maybe that's just me.

I love the groove man! The vocal chops should have a bit more reverb and should be a tad more quiet. The arrangement makes it very pleasant to listen to! As for the mastering, you should consider improving your mixing before focusing on the master. Yes, you can hide flaws of mixing with great mastering, but to some extent. I personally like well mixed tracks with any level of mastering over not so well mixed ones with "super good" mastering.