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WIPs / Re: [_] Wildcat - Kyajsha (Chill, New Age, Odesza)
« on: January 12, 2016, 01:44:52 pm »
Yes, it's fresh. Originality. You have skill ! I really like samples you used. Nothing to add from me, just waiting for other stuff and I'll check your SC.

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WIPs / Re: Beginner Looking for insight !
« on: January 12, 2016, 01:39:34 pm »
The bass on the drop doesn't match well :/ maybe try some progression or just another note. I like the breaks and the whole climate of your track !

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WIPs / Re: Progressive house WIP
« on: January 12, 2016, 01:36:18 pm »
At the end of the 3rd bar it can be more catchy, if you'll go with the melody up. Just try it, that's my little proposal. The drop is very nice, I'm waiting for the progres and the full arrangement, good luck :) !!

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Very nice track mate :) ! But is the vocal not to loud ? (and maybe cut some low freq). That's one thing I noticed. Keep this good work :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Dreamscape | Future Bass
« on: January 11, 2016, 12:09:17 am »
Yeah, in 0:45-46, 0:56 there are some strange sounds coming - I mean the harmony. For the first hearing, first impression, it sounds not good for me. The drop - it's sooo cool ! Nice atmosphere and this just brought me smile on face :) The way you used simple synths from 2:10, time after time detuned it, add a reverb and glide (I guess :p) is also pretty good. On the 2nd break strange sound that I mentioned firstly come again. The transition in 2nd drop in 3:35 is kinda interesting but too violent and dramatic for me. That's my opinion. Good work guys :D !

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WIPs / Re: 2nd WIP <3
« on: January 10, 2016, 11:52:35 pm »
From the 0:11 - the synth goes out of key, and the same thing in 0:55 (at this point it kills the break). Maybe try another note, when it comes higher ? Because the beginning is interesting. You have an originality in this track, you experimented on the drop, but when the sound from 1:17-18 goes with one note hm.. just try to add some reverb in this little time section, it will sound bigger (now it feels very concentrated in the center). Remember, it's other person opinion, you can agree or disagree, it's your track and your music :) Good luck in work !

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As a violinist, I like your violin section in this track haha :) ! Especially when strings come with 'spiccato' (the form of articulation). It's realistic and well imitated. From me, you should add something that will make a background for the track, to make flow. Also experiment with some sounds. You know, you have the main melody. Play it with different sounds, maybe from synthesizers or from recorded sample and place it in the different places of your arrangement. I agree that the track is repetitive, but I think you want to make a kind of chill track, so, that's fine :) As I said (not to much, I know), I will focus on these things that I mentioned. Good luck and I'm waiting for progress or your next track. Do music you like and expresses yourself :) !!

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