Thanks for the replies guys
Well i agree with the hihats, i often have trouble with how to treat my hihats that they dont sound shitty

Never thought about the chords clashing with the chords thing, i always thought the kick is just bad

The thing about the off key pad is a really stupid mistake; I used a vocal sample and pitched it on the same note but i forgot to pitch them into key after that, i have fixed it in my version but now the pad is either way too high or way too low if i want it to be in key. This also explains why the bassline is off key because i used the pad as a reference.
I dont really know what you mean by engaging, i wanted to make a kinda laid back track and i had some ideas so i got that long

probably should have introduced more chord progressions or melodies to keep it more interesting

I dont really have any type of musical background besides the music classes you have at highschool (i pretty much forgot 90% of what i learned there) but i would like to learn the basics of playing the piano one day.
Still thank you for the honest feedback guys