Hi man,

I think there are some very cool sounds in your track. Really like that kinda uplifting high sound, only maybe you should check the really high end of the sound, because after a while it starts to create bleeding ears. Besides that I think you should start of the track with a low pass filter, so the listener is like gliding into the track. Finally I think that all the sounds can use a bit of sidechain. I like it when the kick is very audiable, but now your synths are interfering a bit with the kick.

Honestly, I think it's a very cool concept. Could be a great chilltrap type of track. I hope you can use my feedback

Can you maybe give your feedback on my track as well? would be great!
https://soundcloud.com/iuvenis_official/memoria/s-Og6nJ

Thanks and good luck in your further projects!

Iuvenis