Absolutely love it. I think the drums are perfect for this kind of track, a more powerful kick would ruin the vibe. I would love to try some weird lowpass automation on the master track

Lowpass automation?  i like the sound of that

This song is just so weird and cool and different I love it. All the weird samples somehow work. Keep it as an interlude. I could see this being a nice break between tracks to clear the audio palette. I would have some sort of resolution to it at the end. maybe just a big reverb washout or something.

I like that idea. Ill probably end up doing that for the end thanks

Very interesting definitely has a good vibe to it. the 'water' sounds great. Is this all or are you going to continue it? because It is really good for the intro of a song adding more elements like a sub bass and such could really make this great.

I wanted to keep it as an interlude for my EP but idk maybe i should make a full track out of it 
Thanks for the listen

The complextro glitchy part a 1:47 is dope. You should try making it even glitchier with more sounds more complex i guess. throw in some reverse snares some white noise a bunch of different samples

Really wicked stuff dude http://www.catchthatbeat.com/mvnners-tenderly-ledezma-remix/

hey thanks for the blog post!!! means a lot

https://soundcloud.com/mledezma/ramen-noodles-at-4am-interlude

dis https://soundcloud.com/murmurneuro/default-gateway

i made this one. Idk if its really a growl
https://soundcloud.com/murmurneuro/dodomeki