This is pretty cool 

The snare starting at 1:06 could use some compression because it doesn't hit all too hard like it should. Maybe consider sidechaneing your lead to the snare, or just turning the volume of the snare up.
Also at 1:30, the lead feels like it stops too abruptly. A downlifter or like a crash symbol or like a white noise downlifter thing might help that. Or even like a different sound/lead there if it wasn't meant to be a breakdown.

 

Nice, I like the idea of it.

The hats seem a little loud, maybe turn them down a bit.
Also, I think a fill type thing would be cool at :13 and :28. Though taking the kick out there works, some other type of sound thats just a bit more drastic would help I think.

Nice!

At about :28 it gets a little slow, maybe consider adding another element here to create more interest. I think if you did something with the vocal part here like chopped up or panned or something it might be cool. Also I think the drop would be better if you had that 'ooooo' sound like fade or something after it hits. But do it like every 4 bars.