I don't love the beginning, it's a bit too future for me. That's just not really my style though, it's pretty subjective.

I love the vocal work, the reverb on it is really nice. Once the beginning melody comes back in too, they fit really well together actually. It's cool how by itself I don't love the intro but coupled with the lyrics and some other synth work it really comes together!

The percussion work at 0:57 is incredible. The samples are really crisp, and it builds up perfectly. The cymbal at 1:08 sounds stretched, you might want to tweak the EQ's and filters on that to get it sounding more natural.

Holy cow, did NOT expect that heavy drop. Gives the track a whole different feel. I like the bass that's coupled with the kicks, though it's just a tad fast in my opinion. I think the synth that starts at 1:15 could use some more high end and maybe even a high pass filter, something to give it a little bit more life.

I like that intro melody again paired with the beat. And when the vocals come in, yes pleeeeease.

I LOVE how unique this track is, it's super different yet awesome. It keeps you guessing. I'd keep going on this track, with some more length and maybe another break or something, this could be a stellar piece of work.