This genre really isnt my strong suit but I had fun playing around with the idea and I wanted to know if you guys think this is a good bases for an EDM track.

https://soundcloud.com/officialbounds/wip-edm-thing/s-2cwjo

I threw some really bad quick master on it so you could actually here it. None of the mixing or mastering is final.

EDIT: Thanks for all this feedback guys, now its time to turn my phone off, switch my internet off and lock my self in my room until I get this right lel