Dimension: you need more variation (maybe some cool fx) until the chords come in. You absolutely need more power when the chords come in. It sounds really empty, and when you introduce the bass, it does not feel nice. The track starts getting rhythm when you add all the percussion. The build up is semi nice but you still need more, mixing and structure.

there is not coherence between the build up and the drop.  You need to work big time on the drop. look for other presets and try to mix the hi frequencies, you are not giving them a lot of space.

This is interesting. you need to make everything sound cleaner. cut some highs, sidechain compression to your kick. I like the idea a lot it just the frequencies that annoyed my ear.

when you introduce the drop, it does not make much sense from the previous part... you need a punchier kick and porbably try a different synth for the melody and also another melody.