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Finished Tracks / Algrus - Triba TripHop
« on: July 03, 2016, 04:57:11 am »
Wrapped up this track. Chill & Sexual.
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The link has stopped working, did you take it down?
Overall my biggest point would just be fleshing out more groove elements of it. It's totally a passable DJ track as it is but I would probably be mixing something over it the whole time. Check out some of these examples that came to mind:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgStLrJkQnc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeN4mqwh7is
Just listen to how seemingly minimal yet super fleshed out they sound, I think that's the type of vibe you should be going for with this. 100% needs a snare at some point (I was dying waiting for it to come in lol)
Hope that helps! Great work dude keep it up!
Dig it. That hi hat is a bit hot, and a little too much sizzle. It sounds harsh and it sticking out. Tuck it back a bit in the mix.
Cool sounds, and a nice dark athmosphere to it. The track feels a bit empty, heavy bass but the mids seem a bit neglected. Also the breakdown needs something more (just my opinion). Nice techno sound overall and squecky synth after the breakdown is nice! Just try to master and polish every sound and balance lows, mids and highs.
Good luck!
It´s very repetitive(duh, it´s techno), same sweeps creating the ambience over and over. When there´s no sweeps it sounds a bit "empty". Maybe insert some white noise? The recurring theme does not come alive in the break, in stead a new theme is entered and crashes with the one that has been going the whole track so far. This makes the break sound, and feel, badly constructed IMO. If you can morph them it would make it more solid. Hope this helps. Good luck.