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recently this week I uploaded a track 'Fragment' has some classic influence vibe of complextro with a current vibe of 2k16
I hope you guys will love what you hear!  ;D

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Hey man
Very nice sound design, although i feel that the basses are too wide and everything is spread out and nothing is really in the middle. Id be sure to mono your kick and sub and maybe some of ur other sounds to get your stereo field sounding right.
Cheers

Prob had a rush on the bass while widing it. and for the kick and sub is already been mono, I think I didn't check the setting on my stereo imaging in the mastering

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This track was one of my recent work (not really recent) with the Indonesian duos OverGroove for a local movie in Indonesia called "Badoet"
(thought it would be great to still share this around even on this forum!)

putting that aside, I would love to hear some opinions and feedback so we can improve on for future tracks! :)



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Finished Tracks / Re: Finished this in one day YEEAAAHHH!
« on: January 09, 2016, 07:32:39 am »
haha this is nice. imo would improve on the snare eq and make it more hard hitting to make it more fat and sweet since the kick is already that good. :)

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WIPs / Re: Dictate - Cybercrunk [NEURO - EARLY WIP]
« on: January 09, 2016, 07:21:01 am »
this is pretty dope, everything's sounds alright imo.

I think it would sound dope if there was another snare going in with more release after the main snare hits on the first bar on each beat
(kick, snare1, kick, snare2 with more release/or either layer together with snare1) to give it more variety,

also agree with ocular on introducing new basses on second half :)
feeling some joe ford vibe in this

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So far, it sounds awesome overall! I have a couple suggestions though. During the first buildup, the piano seemed a little weak, and was quickly overpowered when you introduced the reverby stab synth sound. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but it could have a bit more presence. Also, during the first drop, the layered synths were interfering with the hi hats/crashes, and they sounded a bit lost in the mix. Doing a bit of subtractive eq'ing to the synths around the main frequencies of where the hi-hats and crashes lay should help bring them out a bit more in the mix. Also, like what has already been suggested, the kick needs some attention, and the bass in the section at 2:11 should be boosted up a bit too. An idea for the transition, since you mentioned you'd like to add in a guitar, would be to add either a crunchy, slightly distorted or a clean reverby guitar riff into the section at 2:11 and have it carry into your next drop. If you don't have an actual guitar, Ample Sound has some pretty neat sample based guitar vsts that you could check out, which are pretty expressive and have a nice sound to them. If you're familiar with Aire, he's been using their AME2 plugin and the results have sounded fairly nice.


The build up still needs work don't worry about it, thanks for the feedback. I'll improve on the mix and ofcourse I know Aire, me and him are good friends :)
also I'll get the ample sound guitar soon it looks nice :D

To me the snare is kind of clashing with that main synth once everything starts getting beefy (1.25). I like the kick, i think the levels are just slightly out of balance for the mix as a whole (but pretty close).

Maybe try dropping a db or two starting with like -.75 to see how it sounds; on that main synth, with some brief dips in highs/mids to clear some room for the snare when it hits, and then gently pushing the drum buss a little bit in increments as you might notice some low mid stuff that you need to adjust in doing that. The synth you have going is actually pretty close to the one in this track below. You could try this as a reference for some better balance, i'd probably listen to it at lower volumes to equal mix levels though just because it's pushed pretty heavily:


I'll see what I can do to improve thanks! :)

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Heyo Victiz :D

I like the intro atmosphere and how you bring the progression. It sounds amazing. Kick is a bit weak in the highlight. Snare is fine.

Although, I don't really thing like it's pop rock. It's progressive/uplifting for sure but I see pop rock more with actual guitars or something sounding like it. (Like this)

It's good. I like it ;)

Keep it up !

yes i'm actually trying to get that guitar but it seems hard atm :L also i'll do something with the kick thanks! and god damn it you got my name wrong rip :(

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https://soundcloud.com/viticz/viticz-x-tyrrer-stories-wip/s-ut1iF

Just started this out with a friend. is something like pop rock/progressive?
and currently need some good opinions before bringing it into a garage drop or something else
(feedback/opinion for transition would be nice) :D

p.s don't ask/say anything related to kontakt, our kontakt is pretty much broken rn  :-\

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Finished Tracks / Re: A-GON - moving on
« on: January 08, 2016, 11:18:57 am »
Really neat! could do more work with the transition to the second drop also kick doesn't fit much on the second drop imo would change to a diff kick so it will flow nicely :)
great job

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Finished Tracks / Re: Konac - Sanctity
« on: January 08, 2016, 11:14:34 am »
damn bro this is neat af  8) 8) 8) 8) 8)

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Inspiration/Creativity/Motivation / Re: What/Who inspired you to start?
« on: January 08, 2016, 11:10:02 am »
The ost in this game 'Wipeout' got some great tracks and it all actually started here :D (before this version game too)
https://youtu.be/W637xyjv3io


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WIPs / Re: weird future bass wip -
« on: January 08, 2016, 10:21:40 am »
this is super neat! imo try touching the octave by bringing it low to high on that rapid snare. the rest are super crazy dude all that left is just a decent mixdown/mastering and you're ready to go! :)

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WIPs / Re: Is almost done but I currently have 2 versions
« on: January 07, 2016, 02:23:37 am »
I would combine the 2 tracks. The 1st drop of A and the last drop of B would make a really good track together!

I'll think about this but I really wanna keep the prog house drop imo :D

Woah! They are both really good m8!!

I would pick version A. if you do a good Mixing and Mastering you could send it to Monstercat.

And version B could be a free DL treat for your followers, this version too would need some minor improvements tho'

But all in all, it sounds awesome, keep it up!!

ya reminds me of how vicetone does it for one of his releases. idk but I'll keep that in mind and thanks for feedback but currently my mastering is not that great but I can handle the mixdowns :)

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WIPs / Re: Is almost done but I currently have 2 versions
« on: January 06, 2016, 09:51:33 am »
I like A version more, but I feel like both have the same problem: the melodic drop at 2:23 sounds muddy, that part really needs some level balance and better EQ

Ya i'll try to do something about the melodic part cause currently the bass was actually the same from first and third drop so I might have messed up some automation somewhere and the saws prob got lot high ends too. Thanks! :)

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WIPs / Is almost done but I currently have 2 versions
« on: January 06, 2016, 09:16:04 am »
Currently I have 2 version of this song.
So I can't really decided which is good depending on composition/flow, both are finished track and I think
I have to tweak a little more that's all.  :)

A: https://soundcloud.com/viticz/viticz-fate-1/s-iNymt

B: https://soundcloud.com/viticz/viticz-fate/s-kr5Lz

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