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Finished Tracks / Re: i am imago - Biceps | Progressive Deep House
« on: July 10, 2016, 12:34:52 pm »
Hey,

The track sounds good and you could work on the top end. Seems like it over powers other elements !

Have a great day :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Storm Infinity - Hollow Meaning | Future Garage
« on: July 10, 2016, 12:32:08 pm »
Hey there,

The start of the track is nice, after 1:30 the melody feels a bit monotonous.

Happy Producing ! :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Smokey - Mean Bucket
« on: July 04, 2016, 01:42:43 pm »
Hi Smokey,

Nice Intro...Could be a bit shorter !

Rest of the track is nicely arranged. It would be nice to have a little variation on the paino notes :)

Have a great day!

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Finished Tracks / Re: Kids/Candy/Toy sounding EDM track
« on: July 04, 2016, 01:38:20 pm »
Its sounds exactly like the way you described it :) Reminds me of a weird futuristic merry go round :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Anxiety | Porter/Mau5 style house
« on: July 04, 2016, 01:25:06 pm »
Beautifully Done....  :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Colored Dreams (My first track ever)|(Need Reviews)
« on: January 22, 2016, 05:24:04 pm »
Hi The Dog :)

0:00: Intro feels a bit too side chained here, unless that was the artist choice you were going for, I would reduce the side chain and use it only after the kick comes in.

0:48: I think you could maybe pan the element (hats) a bit and lower the volume on it by at least 2 db.

1:07: Nice drum roll :)

1:15: I would follow bettlejuice's suggestion about the kick and check all other elements and see which ones have frequencies clashing at the low end.

2:45: Good use of the white noise sweep

I hope the this helps. Keep making music :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: My own uplifting trance track
« on: January 22, 2016, 05:03:31 pm »
Excellent choice of elements :) Maybe try working on the build up into the drop?

You could try using a filter to roll off the low end into the build up.
and drop the volume by 1 db gradually over 8 bars and bring it back up at the 1st beat of the drop.

Hope that makes sense :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: Mies Dominic - In Retrospect [Nu Disco]
« on: January 10, 2016, 04:37:28 pm »
Hey Miles, love the arrangement and that guitar riff :)

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Finished Tracks / Re: dark cat - hot chocolate
« on: January 10, 2016, 04:29:12 pm »
The track title got me curious !!! :)

Very nicely done track :)

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