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Finished Tracks / Re: Dreamcatcher Remix | Progressive House
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:46:28 pm »
Need more sub.
The vocal is not loud enough, also it's out of tune sometimes.
The rest is said by portal

Good luck!

P.s. the "8-bit-sound" in the beginning is really cool!

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Finished Tracks / Re: JACK - Stars (Original Mix)
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:42:36 pm »
Cool idea, but it needs more elements. It's a little bit boring.
The Drop is a little too loud compared to the break.
The Kick is too weak. Also think about "trying out other synths that are more exciting".
Good luck!

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Finished Tracks / Re: Feenixpawl - Ghosts ft. Melissa Ramsay (Fezza Remix)
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:38:17 pm »
aaron described it pretty good.
Especially the first note of your bass in the chorus/drop is wrong, i think.
Try another progression and maybe another bass. The kickdrum is too weak and the other sounds need more sidechain.
Good luck!

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Finished Tracks / Re: Daft Punk - One More Time (Brandon Kollaja Bootleg)
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:33:43 pm »
Sorry, but out of key and out of sync.

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Finished Tracks / Re: "Red & Blue" (Original) - first track finished in 2016, electronic/groove
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:31:26 pm »
Really cool sound - could be interesting for movies!
But I think the chorus could have one more layer - for the high mids. Maybe strings or a pad or choir.
Good work, MarkSutor!

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