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i dig the track, i feel like the bass could be a bit crunchier or maybe be heavier and then automate to where it smooths out to that plucky bass. leads kind of sound a little back , could be my speakers though. other than that good job
I don't know the original song but I dig what you did with this. I think the little break down you have at 1:00 could be done a little better, maybe by playing a bit more with the listener's anticipation the section before and having the two parts have a more distinctive contrast. The section you have after the drop could also be better by developing better contrast ( Think yin yang ) by playing a bit more with dynamics/filters and anything else that you can introduce/draw back for added effect.
Yup what Artic said. There are cool elements, but they're not in the same key! I think you'll be on track to a cool song once you fix that.
Dear the ones who read this,
I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me.
https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiff
Hey man!!
Well i listen here, and well... check the key of the melody dont match with the vocal, pad anything, just check this... and after try to get a structure of your song, like a intro, build up, drop... something when make sense for the music theory! ^^
Have a good production session
