Could you have another listen and tell me what you think now?  Made a few changes.

New link:  https://soundcloud.com/dj_insight/soar-dont-jump/s-s6Ytl

I dont exactly know if this falls under the category of techno, but whatever it is, I dig it.  Dark and weird.  I like that little (maybe vocal?) sample thing that starts happening at 2:30.  How did you do that?

I wish I had stuck with it when I started trying to produce in highschool, and again early in college those few times.  I didn't seriously get into producing until maybe 3 years ago, wasting lots of valuable time.  Luckily, I spent much of that time DJing, so I was still learning about how tracks were built and meant to sound, etc.

I also wish I hadn't associated myself with a certain "easy" label early on in my learning. I was excited just to get a track signed, but they weren't really a good label, my production was still crap, and nothing really came of it.  I should've just put those songs out for free.  Oh well.

I have to wait until I grow old enough to have more freedom to handle my time.

This is not a terrible thing? 

I started making music in college. I spent a lot of my freetime doing it, and it was okay. But I have gotten far better after college, and additionally, I now have a better job and money to spend on things.  Since graduating, I have gotten: a better computer (my old laptop would sometimes crash while exporting, would get underruns all the time), monitors (my old speakers were desktop speakers...), audio interface, etc.

There's no rule that says if you don't get a song signed before you're 21 that your career is over. Make do with what little time you have now, write down ideas, make notes of things you WANT to learn in the future, create patches in 30 minute blocks of time, I dunno.  But don't worry; you have a lot of life ahead of you.

As for the "Amen Break" drums buildup Im still on the fence about it

I like it a lot as well, for what it's worth.

The mix is amazing actually.  I wish I could get that

Well done on the breakbeat programming mate.  Nicely liquidy