Future house/bounce drop

[JAFARi]

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Hi guys! I had this idea for a drop! Is it nice? What could I do to make it the best possible?

Thanks!

[TUBON]

Hey! The idea is good, it bounces pretty well, the bassline  connects with the lead, only this is that the melody isnt that catchy, at least for me, the last note is problem i think


overall good idea! Would love, you could add also some vocal chops whether in the drop or in the break to make it more organic