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jejune.

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Trap WIP
« on: May 11, 2017, 06:32:12 am »
hey guys give me feedback pls

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Re: Trap WIP
« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2017, 12:06:18 pm »
yo dude just listened to the tune ! i really dig it your sub bass sounds tight and the mixdown as well. i feel like your brass stabs could hit harder, lacks low end to me. otherwise the track is good to me :D
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Re: Trap WIP
« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2017, 09:13:42 pm »
Good shit, love the texture of everything, and all of your panning is really fucking cool. Would love if the chord progression evolved a bit more from the two chords.
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Re: Trap WIP
« Reply #3 on: May 24, 2017, 07:20:18 am »
hey guys thanks for your input!

i reworked my track and that is what came out:



again feel free to tell me what you think
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Re: Trap WIP
« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2017, 11:19:23 pm »
That's really cool! Love it. :) I'd continue with some melody lines over it, vocal would be awesome, but don't listen to me.  :-X :D
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