Any advice would be greatly appreciated!!

[handprint]

Just want to know if this sucks or not. Thanks


https://soundcloud.com/user-348327154/chill-vibe

[paaaaaaaauul]

I think it's pretty cool, especially 0:40
I don't really have any advice cause I'm not sure what to do with sample based music

[jaefit]

Good start, man. It's super quiet though. Could be cool as an interlude as-is. If you want to take it further maybe try to play the chords on a keyboard or something, make some hits with some crash cymbals, etc. and see where that takes you.

[djdillyc]

I agree with the above comment. Maybe at about 42 seconds you could have some silence or take out some elements. That way it'll come back and hit harder. I can almost here the silence at 42 seconds, some kind of cool whoosh effect (play around with different fx samples) and then the bass and drums hitting harder. Even more groove to the rhythm could be cool. I hope that makes sense!

[FarleyCZ]

It definitely doesn't suck. It really reminds a lot of these sampling-based hiphop tracks. If it's possible, I'd add a little fafe in and outs (like less than 100ms long) to the samples, they feel like they are abruptly switched over everytime. Some little rythm line or synthline over them to glue them together might work too. Beat is cool.

The bass though. Waaayyyyy too much sub. That sounds good as it resonates your room, but it has two probblems: It might not work in every room and it will stop you from making the track competitively loud.¨

But good so far. Find a local rapper and magic will happen.