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Starfox, an electro song im making
« on: February 03, 2017, 03:49:28 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/starfox/s-PkINb maybe you can check this and let me know your opinions and suggestions!! cheers!
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Re: Starfox, an electro song im making
« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2017, 09:35:11 am »
Man that bass at the drop is CRAZY.

Couple of things:
-you're kinda at max volume RIGHT from the getgo. Make the build...well...build.
-The chord progression is a tad confusing, though that's a matter of preference.
-the drums in the drop need some work. They hit hard but I really want the snare to be wider, and you could add a clap in there to layer over top of it (have it play just barely before the snare to give it a nice "flam" like sound)

KEEP GOING WITH THIS IDEA.

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Re: Starfox, an electro song im making
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2017, 06:27:55 pm »
Man that bass at the drop is CRAZY.

Couple of things:
-you're kinda at max volume RIGHT from the getgo. Make the build...well...build.
-The chord progression is a tad confusing, though that's a matter of preference.
-the drums in the drop need some work. They hit hard but I really want the snare to be wider, and you could add a clap in there to layer over top of it (have it play just barely before the snare to give it a nice "flam" like sound)

KEEP GOING WITH THIS IDEA.
dude do you recommend to use ott in drums, ive been trying it lately and the sound is kinda good but it doesn't sound stronger, just better, you know what i mean? i would like to know if you know it can be a good idea, thanks for all the advices!! I really apreciate it! :D
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Re: Starfox, an electro song im making
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2017, 04:01:15 am »
mix is a bit loud but i fuck w this heavy. lots of emotion

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Re: Starfox, an electro song im making
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2017, 04:22:18 pm »
mix is a bit loud but i fuck w this heavy. lots of emotion
yes, i feel like i need to make some of my sounds more dynamic, guess it's a matter of time that i find an equilibrium, thanks for the comment, i try more and more to make music that actually identifies me, cheerssss! :D
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