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Wisher (original track)
« on: February 03, 2017, 04:29:59 am »
I always come back to TPF for a good dose of interesting perspectives, I put this song up yesterday:


Would love to get hammered with criticism (don't worry I can take it without being offended), all I want is to get better
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Re: Wisher (original track)
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2017, 08:45:38 pm »
I really like the vibe of this, the choppy vocals are great! It feels a bit awkward the way the first breakdown comes in so suddenly. Also, with the piano, it might be a good idea to play around with the velocities a bit, to make it sound more natural, especially in the second breakdown. Generally a good track though, and it was mixed pretty well.

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Re: Wisher (original track)
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2017, 09:03:13 pm »
heh thanks man! I appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback. It's tricky, I actually spent a ton of time messing around with not just the velocity of the notes for the piano chords but also their placement. Offsetting each note of the chord a tiny bit, hmmm I'm gonna use this as an excuse to say its time to upgrade my free piano vst! maybe?! hahaha paired with some fabfilter reverb and no one will know my secret  ;D