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Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« on: January 31, 2017, 11:17:41 pm »
Hi all! It's been a while since I've been on here but I wanted to share a remix I'm working on right now. I know, the original is nearly perfect but I couldn't resist trying my hand at it. I took a minimal trance approach with a blend of progressive trance. Let me know what you think! (:

https://soundcloud.com/musicalflowstate/motorcycle-as-the-rush-comes-flowstate-remix
« Last Edit: February 08, 2017, 04:22:31 pm by Flowstate »
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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2017, 03:46:35 am »
This is a well constructed track.
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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2017, 06:01:05 pm »
thanks man! It was a pretty fluid production process, something that I don't come by too often unfortunately haha.

Nice to hear from you, hope you've been well.
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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #3 on: February 07, 2017, 03:49:15 pm »
this is really good man. The only things i think you should tweak is to let the riser and the white noise in the intro end around 0:30 or 0:31 so the vocal can stand on it's own right before the bassline hits around 1:00. Also...the build up before the drop seemed a bit too quiet and it didn't sound like there was a lot going on. I wasn't sure if that was done intentionally or if you're still working on that.

This isn't super necessary to do, but maybe introduce the piano chords around 2:02 but low pass it and slowly open the filter so the listener knows it's coming at 2:24. Just a thought =)

Other than that, great ideas here! Keep it up.

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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2017, 10:47:44 pm »
Well constructed track indeed.  This is awesome! the drop was a very pleasant surprise.  Listened all the way through.  Now Im gonna do my own remix haha, didnt know this was available!

Only constructive criticism I have right now is at 4:22 when the kick is solo right before the wall of sound hits.  It's good and im actually satisfied with it, but if i had the project file opened in front of me, then I would try using a finger snap instead or mess around with a couple short percussion layers just to see what it sounds like.

again, great work!
« Last Edit: February 07, 2017, 10:54:54 pm by alanisnotcool »

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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2017, 04:23:42 pm »
this is really good man. The only things i think you should tweak is to let the riser and the white noise in the intro end around 0:30 or 0:31 so the vocal can stand on it's own right before the bassline hits around 1:00. Also...the build up before the drop seemed a bit too quiet and it didn't sound like there was a lot going on. I wasn't sure if that was done intentionally or if you're still working on that.

This isn't super necessary to do, but maybe introduce the piano chords around 2:02 but low pass it and slowly open the filter so the listener knows it's coming at 2:24. Just a thought =)

Other than that, great ideas here! Keep it up.

I'll check out these points! Thanks for the feedback mate, I want to find a way to make the build fuller but at the same time cut it to something minimal again before the drop. So we'll see what happens!
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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2017, 04:25:36 pm »
Well constructed track indeed.  This is awesome! the drop was a very pleasant surprise.  Listened all the way through.  Now Im gonna do my own remix haha, didnt know this was available!

Only constructive criticism I have right now is at 4:22 when the kick is solo right before the wall of sound hits.  It's good and im actually satisfied with it, but if i had the project file opened in front of me, then I would try using a finger snap instead or mess around with a couple short percussion layers just to see what it sounds like.

again, great work!

Thanks for your feedback man, I'll mess around with 4:22 and see if I can create something that stimulates the progression of the song.

Yeah I was ecstatic when I found out they released the vocal track, such a fun song to work on. Here's the link, you can download it directly from here! https://soundcloud.com/davedresden/motorcycle-as-the-rush-comes-full-acappella-2014
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Re: Motorcycle - As The Rush Comes (Flowstate Remix)
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2017, 09:03:16 am »
Really good stuff man! The whole thing flows really nicely, and everything is mixed well. My only comment would be that the Bass that comes in at 0:37 feels a bit dry...perhaps some messing around with a chorus and some distortion would help a bit.  Good work!