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introducing my track for ya
« on: January 11, 2017, 05:37:49 pm »
Hello every one♥
my name is oran aharon, an israeli begginer producer.
i just signed up and i want to show you my two tracks i just uploaded to youtbue
plz listen and comment what's your opinion

first track, "Faith":
an chill step track i just finished
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-yRA4c9S8HU

second track, "SAFARi"
A very agressive track combines strong leads and africans vocals :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-O-B1mvr36c

if you liked what i'm doing plz subscribe and like the tracks it will be very helpful♥

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Re: introducing my track for ya
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2017, 09:20:12 pm »
please give my music some attention and comment your opinion♥
very importnant to me!

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Re: introducing my track for ya
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2017, 09:56:02 pm »
Your composition is really good in faith, but it seems like too much attention is paid to the high end. The soul of a chill track is in the midrange. You are definitely on the right track though, try lowering the cutoff on some sounds and see how that works.

With safari, try bringing the lead down a little bit, but great sound overall.

Tight visuals by the way!
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Re: introducing my track for ya
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2017, 10:10:36 pm »
the musicality is there for sure, how long have you been making music? you seem to have a good handle on song structure. 'Faith' in particular is really nice.

i think the mixing could definitely use a bit of work, especially in "Safari." i think that lead could use some more layers & depth, while also maybe giving the kick more space. the transition into the breakdown 1:22 could use some work, too. i like that little empty space, but it feels jarring at the same time. bigroom house is a really tricky balancing game because of how minimal it is, but if you can master that you'll have a good handle on mixing overall. keep working at it, you'll get there!

and also, welcome to the forum! i hope you'll feel free to check out other sections and ask any questions you have. we also have a chat, the link is in my bio, there's usually someoen online to talk music with, it's cool. good luck!!
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