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Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« on: January 11, 2017, 03:55:12 pm »

I want to add vocals later but for now, is the idea good?

Thanks a lot!

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2017, 04:49:21 pm »
The vocals are mixed really weirdly, they seem to go back and forward in the mix at random, I really like the idea though.

I would have added the vocals in a bit earlier and maybe some snares in the build to make it more dynamic, but you're probably better than me at this and it's all taste so w/e

It's a nice upbeat track :)

I would like to hear a high pluck type melody in the chorus for some variation, you seem to be lacking in the high frequencies.


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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2017, 12:43:06 am »
this is pretty. the breakdown/build has a lot of potential, but the synths are so quiet!! i would make the pads stand out more, and maybe add a few more melodic layers. it feels really empty in comparison to the drop. the drop is really nice though! as far as technical things, you might want to consider making the very low end of the bassline mono. id also second what ross said about the vocals. it sounds like they're being sidechained? you dont need that.

youve got a good start here, i hope you keep going with it!
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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #3 on: January 12, 2017, 12:56:40 am »
Hey guys! Thanks for the reply!

I'm looking into maybe adding some melodic things in the drop but I really want to keep the breakdown kinda dull and smooth so it gives the drop a big effect, and I'm also planning on putting vocals!

Thanks for the feedback!!

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #4 on: January 12, 2017, 06:20:54 am »
I'm feeling actually starting the song on the drop, it would set a really nice tone.
« Last Edit: January 12, 2017, 08:16:06 am by 270 »

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #5 on: January 12, 2017, 04:21:52 pm »
Really dig this alot! really looking forward for the finish product :D

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #6 on: January 12, 2017, 06:41:26 pm »
This is great! Loving the overall sound, only thing is change is being up the synths! It'll be hard to hear those on low quality headphones and speakers

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #7 on: January 12, 2017, 11:17:43 pm »
Thanks again for all the feedback! I'll upload an updated version soon!

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Re: Would like feedback on this new WIP plz :)!
« Reply #8 on: January 13, 2017, 01:08:23 am »

Here it is.

I added a melody in the breakdown and elaborated the intro, but i'm not shure about the bass in the second part of it.

How does it sound? Is the track good?