this is pretty. the breakdown/build has a lot of potential, but the synths are so quiet!! i would make the pads stand out more, and maybe add a few more melodic layers. it feels really empty in comparison to the drop. the drop is really nice though! as far as technical things, you might want to consider making the very low end of the bassline mono. id also second what ross said about the vocals. it sounds like they're being sidechained? you dont need that.
youve got a good start here, i hope you keep going with it!