Made this future(y) track, would really appreciate feedback on this

[OneCub]

https://soundcloud.com/itsonecub/hasley-coming-down-onecub-remix

yes theres alot wrong with it (which I want to fix) but before I get down for a second session and polish it up I would love to hear any thoughts and pointers you guys could give! 

[endlesstea]

hi!

I wouldn't say there is that much wrong with this, it is fairly coherent and stays pretty interesting throughout 

I would say that the white noise at the drops could do with a little turning down or filtering, as it stands out quite sharply, taking over the mix instead of just filling it out.

i'll add anything else I can think of later!

[OneCub]

hi!

I wouldn't say there is that much wrong with this, it is fairly coherent and stays pretty interesting throughout 

I would say that the white noise at the drops could do with a little turning down or filtering, as it stands out quite sharply, taking over the mix instead of just filling it out.

i'll add anything else I can think of later!

The white noise being too loud is definitely the biggest issue with the track. Glad to hear you think it's interesting man, thanks!!

[ajh00]

this. is good.

[OneCub]

this. is good.

ajh00, thanks yo!   

[JohnSeagull]

Same as my mate, nice track but too much noise ! Really good job anyway

[OneCub]

Same as my mate, nice track but too much noise ! Really good job anyway

thanks alot man! yes, played this out loud the other day and pretty sure my ears bled a little on the drop lol