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A-GON - Karlita
« on: May 31, 2016, 06:17:46 am »
hey guys some feedback on it would be nice

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Re: A-GON - Karlita
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2016, 08:00:02 pm »
I like how you gradually brought all the elements in, then made a climax and had everything fade out into silence. Although, I think the pad that came in at 1:07 should also have faded in gradually, introducing the climax. I do like the mellow pluck that played in the later half of the song too. Good job.

Since you got feedback on this song, I recommend giving feedback to at least 3 others who haven't gotten any yet if you haven't given any already.

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Re: A-GON - Karlita
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2016, 01:56:17 am »
thank you annie !

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Re: A-GON - Karlita
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2016, 02:01:50 am »
This is a nice, chill track. The drop was well sidechained and, style-wise, well arranged to come in well after the rise. Good melodic and harmonic elements, too. Also I love the little vocal edits you have here and there (not just in the drop but in the break/riser as well). They really add texture to this track.

I can't hear any downsides to this track. The kick at times sounds weak, but that's the only thing I can think of off of the top of my head. Great pads, man. Great music, too, keep it up.

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Re: A-GON - Karlita
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2016, 02:38:07 am »
thank you ! fun fact i finished this track in 1 day haha in about 6 to 8 hours :P