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Andres Walters

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Experiment 01
« on: April 25, 2016, 02:38:40 pm »
hey guys!, i really want to hear feedbacks from you on this one. I've started the mixing / mastering process already but feel free with regard to arrangement.

sorry for my English, its not my native language.

https://soundcloud.com/andres-walters/care-master-1



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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2016, 04:02:29 pm »
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If it is set to private, click "share" and copy that link.

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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2016, 04:09:15 pm »

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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #3 on: April 25, 2016, 04:40:10 pm »
No worries!  It's working now :D

Interesting tune!  It's kind of chill, but has some dark elements that are also a bit driving.

The second time the kicks come in, there is another sound that lands with the kick.  It sounds almost electric guitar like.  I want more of it.  I want a melody from it.  It can mingle with the kick and really give you a solid growth from the previous sound.  As it is, it sounds a bit too much like the first section.  Really nice conclusion with the piano!

Keep it up!

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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #4 on: April 25, 2016, 05:34:52 pm »
I love that piano and the whole vibe. I think the song could use a little melody with the piano on the second section.
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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #5 on: April 25, 2016, 06:20:25 pm »
What the intro ! Love this ! Maybe more percussion from 0:50 to keep it interesting ? The same thing in the 2nd chorus. For me, intro, break and outro are the best - very melodic pieces with nice choped samples/vocals :) !

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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #6 on: April 25, 2016, 11:05:40 pm »
thank ya'll for the feedbacks!! it keeps me motivated! i appreciated so much!

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Re: Experiment 01
« Reply #7 on: April 26, 2016, 08:09:36 pm »
Yo, misterious tune you have! Good job
I would recommend to add some (not that much) reverb to the snare and try adding some toms in key with the track hitting the same time as the snare does (Check out GREY if I didn´t make it clear). I think those elements will definitely boost up the track´s vibe.

Keep it up and keep us posted!