Your intro feels just right. I like how you used a mix of bright and dark sounds in your opening. I'm assuming 1:02 is where the rapper would start rapping...If you can't find a rapper you may have to fill it with something else, because that saw can only hold attention for so long on its own. At 1:34, when the drum come in, they're overpowered by the leads, especially the kick. That should be not too hard to fix though. Also, it's a WIP, I know, but I feel like it needs an ending.
-Annie
