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Pan3on - Formentera (Original Mix) LMK what you think
« on: April 04, 2016, 03:15:45 pm »
Hey guys, I'm really proud of this track but would love some feedback.  I made the video as well, which was almost just as time consuming as the track itself.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N07ovyNl7AU

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Re: Pan3on - Formentera (Original Mix) LMK what you think
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2016, 03:51:05 pm »
Overall, I enjoy, no criticism here really. I really like the vocal chop. Sorry, you got spammed. lol, I reported it for ya.

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Re: Pan3on - Formentera (Original Mix) LMK what you think
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2016, 06:21:34 pm »
Thanks a lot man, I really appreciate you taking the time to check it out (and report the spam lol ;D ).

I had a lot of fun with this track, as it was quite different from what I had done before.  I was really happy with the vocal chops and am glad you pointed that out.

I also had a lot of fun making the video (which was tricky since my brother gave me a LOT of footage of his trip to Ibiza, but all of the club footage was vertical, so I needed to figure out how to get it all to fit together).  That, and the laptop I used was SLOOOOOOOOW (video was edited on an older HP, but the track was made using a MacBook).

Thanks again for checking it out :)

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Re: Pan3on - Formentera (Original Mix) LMK what you think
« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2016, 07:01:13 pm »
Sweet track man! LOVE the chord hits and the delay with them, not gonna lie, gonna try to recreate that synth myself. A few things I'd offer to think about is using a different lead during the chorus, and perhaps sidechaining the bass/chords in the chorus? Lastly, and this one isn't as needed, the bass could be a bit bigger in the chorus! It just seems like a simple saw bass and it'd sound pretty cool for a bigger one (in my opinion of course).

Vocal chops are sick, melody is awesome.

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Re: Pan3on - Formentera (Original Mix) LMK what you think
« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2016, 08:07:23 pm »
Hey Arcuo, very good feedback!  Let me know if you need a hand re-creating that synth! 

I'll be sure to work on improving my lead layering and while I spent a little more time on this than usual, my brother and I have ramped up releasing a track a week in order to force ourselves to nail structure/sound composition and identify areas of weakness.

Good point on the bass, I am more than likely going to make a track that forces me to just focus on making a bigger bass to improve in that area now lol.

Thanks again for your constructive feedback, it has reinforced some ideas I had myself, and as always I have fun making these :)