I'll try.
Cons:
- First off, this is probably the biggest issue with it: Right away, the bass-synth thing that plays through most of the song is TOO LOUD. It drowns out everything else in the song whenever it plays, and that is not a good sign. I could hardly hear the kick and barely hear the snare because the bass was too loud. Every other element in the song is quiet compared to it, so it almost feels like it's just a heap of gritty stuff charging at me from out of the speakers. And since there is not much sound design in the way of basses, it quickly became monotonous, and it would have been even more so if it weren't so loud. Turn down the bass!
- Either turn down the bass or turn up everything else in the intro. What happened to me is I turned up the volume because I thought it wasn't loud enough and then--this huge load of noise comes crashing down on me. The contrast is way too much here that's it's not enjoyable.
- I can't really say anything else because that bass was so loud that I couldn't really analyze much.
Pros:
- It's heavy enough that you could excuse away most of the issues as "It's riddim though." Not that I have anything against riddim. =3
- No big issues with composing since riddim is not arrangment-heavy. I'll probably get burned for that, but from the riddim music I've heard, that's what I've taken away from it (or maybe I'm just taking it at face value too much.)
My feedback may not be very accurate because of my inexperience, so maybe try getting a second opinion from someone who is more experienced. By the way, is this actually a remix? Which song?
-Annie
Wait, is this an April Fool's joke? Now I feel stupid. Well, happy late April Fool's. I'm going to go look for a paper bag.
